Thanks for playing. I appreciate the honest feedback. There was supposed to be the other ending, but the game was going to be longer, initially. I decided to go more linear route, so this is the end result. I'm glad that you enjoyed it overall. Best to you!
Thanks for playing. I did intend to make a longer game, but it would involve more "same" things, looping and I just didn't want to overplay it. Will definitely think of doing a longer one, but like this in the future. Cheers!
Hola Niven! Enjoyed the game! I dont know if I was wrong to think She was just stuck in a nightmare and non of what I saw was real. Even the ending, Did the sister actually do it? Did kate shoot herself? Or was is it just in her head.....A bad loop in her head. I ended up replaying it and still had questions lol Which makes it a great game <3
Always great to see your post ✨✨ A thousand thanks for playing my game. The video was amazing! Interesting thought. There was another player, who proposed the same to me and unfortunately I can't give a direct answer, because even thou the story is very direct, the ending is not. See, that final gunshot can be interpreted as the "loop starting again", as Kate is stuck in this "nightmare" and she can't really find closure to her sister's "accident". But, at the same time, you can think that Kate did do it and everything else was just a nightmare, a guilt induced vision of her life, which she could not take anymore. Nevertheless, once you start thinking about it, it becomes more blurred so, if you feel better, you can think that Kate is actually alive, but she suffers from this nightmares, over and over again - Idk if that's better thou. Once again, thanks for a thought provoking conversation and your support. Cheers 🎉
Thanks friend! I reported them immediately. Although, it is kind of flattering to think that my game is worth the hustle for someone else haha. Cheers!
Thanks for playing. I deeply appreciate the feedback and yeah, things like that do happen, unfortunately. I watched the video, it was great. Wish all the best to your channel 🎇🎉
Thanks for playing. To start with the game's story overall is very symbolic. You would be surprised how many details in the game actually indicate the story and emotionality of the main character. The prologue of the game starts with the statement - She is dead, meaning the death of Kate's sister and then it transitions to the picture - which if you don't know is Elizabeth Stuart's portrait, she was Queen of Bohemia, definitely read on her biography, as it is very vital to the story (I can't go over it here, because it would take a lot of explanation). To simplify it represents the innocence, the power, where when it shows Kate, she is naked, representing vulnerability, shame, guilt and proceeding she needs to get dressed, while everything around her is a mess. That's the most basic answer to that detail. There are other details, which tie into the story as well, but it is up to the player to interpret them. So, yeah, it is not about just - oh, a naked woman, haha. I took the game very seriously and worked hard on the impact. Unfortunately, I mentioned this on the page, the game was going to be a much deeper and longer, but I decided to cut some of it and posted it for free. That's about it. Thanks for the comment btw, great observation. If you have any other questions, feel free to ask ✌
Thanks for playing! The old lady was creepy, I do agree with that lol. I do appreciate the feedback a lot. Wish all the best to you and your channel. Cheers!
Thanks for playing. I deeply appreciate the support and positive feedback. Hello to Hispanic community and all the best to them, as well as for you and your channel friend. I'll try to make some good game in the future for sure lol. Cheers 🍻
Thanks for playing. I very much appreciate the feedback. The story could have had another ending, for sure, but that feeling of guilt was part of Kate's personality. In real life, we MUST deal with those things differently, of course. All the best to you friend ✌
Monumental thanks for playing my game man! You, you are one of a kind! Thanks for the BEST feedback and calling me beautiful (even thou I am not). All the best 🍻❤🍷
OMG! Thank you so much! Your feedback means a lot. I loved your game and it was just phenomenal. Can't wait for your next project. Much appreciate the support! Cheers 🎉
Fourth in the line up. Welp... I zipped right pasted the top of the description content warning like a goon. But its well put together, surreal, odd... its going to be stuck in my thoughts for a good while... I haven't really bumped into many PT one hallway slowly altered bit much... but it's done really well here. Good work Niven.
Thanks for playing. I deeply appreciate the positive comments and I'm glad the game was successful in a way that it made you think about the story and how tragic things turned up. I did use the "cliché" PT spooks, but it all connected to the story and in my mind it was a representation of Kate's sanity and her guilt. Well, again, all the best to you and your channel 🎇
I didn't think of it as the time, but the slight shifts in the repeated hallway... the iterations do work really well as a representation the recursion one goes through retracing rethinking things. It fits really well.
I felt like I was watching a horror drama. In particular, the psychological portrayal of the main character was brought out quite well, making the game immersive! it was fun :)
+ I edited the video to make it a bit scarier than the original game.
Thanks for playing! I'm glad you found the story to be interesting and I was trying to make a game a bit more dramatic, movie like, so I guess it worked for you. Best to you and your channel friend!
Hey Niven! Loved the story and the ending, but I'm still wondering if Kate actually killed herself. Since she did say "...when I wake up, the nightmare does not end." and that might imply that she's in a loop.
Thanks a lot for playing my friend, I always appreciate your videos and feedback. I have you say, you are the only one, who asked that question and to be honest, I don't actually know, more like I can't tell. The story is strictly linear and tells the tragic story of both sisters. Now, you hear the gunshot, and the game ends, but was it an actual event that happened or was it a dream in her mind? - Not a bad theory, but again, I can't tell, because in a way it is up to you to interpret the ending, like a "glass half full, half empty" situation. Best of luck and thanks for the topic. Cheers!
I guess reducing stories to a single true sequence is not all that interesting. I'm actually glad you didn't strictly specify what happened since ambiguity leads to an extended amount of interesting interpretations of the story. Thanks for the reply and have a nice day/evening (^^)
I just finished watching the playthrough on your stream and I have to say man, your voice is shockingly good, I would assume you do voice overs for movies or animations, because you should definitely get hired for some serious role. Besides that, I liked how you presented my work to your audience and yeah, sorry about the story being too dark. Nevertheless, huge thanks once again and Happy Thanksgiving!
Thank you i appreciate it, I have been recently looking for voice over type work so that could be a possibility. But I did enjoy the game, i love playing these indies there's a lot of hidden talent that needs to be presented keep up the good work. If you have any other games to play on twitch or even in a YouTube video let me know =D
Thanks for playing. I really appreciate the feedback, it means a lot to me. Someone else actually asked me the same about the Portuguese. Unfortunately, for now, my projects aren't big enough to have multiple languages included, but that's an idea for the future. I would need to employ someone to do that for me, because I can't speak Portuguese so there is an interpreter needed. Thanks for the suggestion. Best to you and your channel!
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Hey, someone re-uploaded your game, probably as a virus. Just letting you know!
Incoherence by MythicGame (itch.io)
Thank you so much mate! Someone else reported the same, I did sent the notification so, hope they get removed. Thanks again 💌
This game was a really interesting on. I do wish we had an optional choice for the end, but regardless. I enjoyed playing it.
Thanks for playing. I appreciate the honest feedback. There was supposed to be the other ending, but the game was going to be longer, initially. I decided to go more linear route, so this is the end result. I'm glad that you enjoyed it overall. Best to you!
Great game, loved how dark it is. Hoping you make some big beefy titles in the future!
Covered as Game #2 in "4 Scary Games Episode 31"
https://youtu.be/b6n3dPywRBQ
Thanks a bunch for playing. Loved the commentary. Wish all the best to you and your channel. Cheers!
Good game! The end was brutal. Wish it would have been a tad lengthier.
Thanks for playing. I did intend to make a longer game, but it would involve more "same" things, looping and I just didn't want to overplay it. Will definitely think of doing a longer one, but like this in the future. Cheers!
YO NIVEN! This game was INDEED a trip, great work!!! >:D
Huge thanks for playing! I'm really glad you enjoyed this. Wish all the best to you and your channel!
Hola Niven! Enjoyed the game! I dont know if I was wrong to think She was just stuck in a nightmare and non of what I saw was real. Even the ending, Did the sister actually do it? Did kate shoot herself? Or was is it just in her head.....A bad loop in her head. I ended up replaying it and still had questions lol Which makes it a great game <3
Always great to see your post ✨✨
A thousand thanks for playing my game. The video was amazing!
Interesting thought. There was another player, who proposed the same to me and unfortunately I can't give a direct answer, because even thou the story is very direct, the ending is not. See, that final gunshot can be interpreted as the "loop starting again", as Kate is stuck in this "nightmare" and she can't really find closure to her sister's "accident". But, at the same time, you can think that Kate did do it and everything else was just a nightmare, a guilt induced vision of her life, which she could not take anymore. Nevertheless, once you start thinking about it, it becomes more blurred so, if you feel better, you can think that Kate is actually alive, but she suffers from this nightmares, over and over again - Idk if that's better thou.
Once again, thanks for a thought provoking conversation and your support. Cheers 🎉
Hey Niven! I thought you might want to know that someone is trying to pass your game as their own - https://mythicgame.itch.io/incoherence
Thanks friend! I reported them immediately. Although, it is kind of flattering to think that my game is worth the hustle for someone else haha. Cheers!
Thanks for playing. Glad that you liked the game. Best to you mate ✌
u too man
love the game. Made very well. The fact that situations like this happen IRL makes this even more scary. Great job!
Thanks for playing. I deeply appreciate the feedback and yeah, things like that do happen, unfortunately. I watched the video, it was great. Wish all the best to your channel 🎇🎉
Huge thanks for playing! Glad that you found the story interesting and made a video on it. All the best to you friend ✌
i liked the game,its made well!!
Thanks for playing. I truly appreciate the feedback. Best to you!
why did i start naked cant you just dress before game?
Thanks for playing.
To start with the game's story overall is very symbolic. You would be surprised how many details in the game actually indicate the story and emotionality of the main character. The prologue of the game starts with the statement - She is dead, meaning the death of Kate's sister and then it transitions to the picture - which if you don't know is Elizabeth Stuart's portrait, she was Queen of Bohemia, definitely read on her biography, as it is very vital to the story (I can't go over it here, because it would take a lot of explanation). To simplify it represents the innocence, the power, where when it shows Kate, she is naked, representing vulnerability, shame, guilt and proceeding she needs to get dressed, while everything around her is a mess. That's the most basic answer to that detail. There are other details, which tie into the story as well, but it is up to the player to interpret them.
So, yeah, it is not about just - oh, a naked woman, haha. I took the game very seriously and worked hard on the impact. Unfortunately, I mentioned this on the page, the game was going to be a much deeper and longer, but I decided to cut some of it and posted it for free. That's about it.
Thanks for the comment btw, great observation. If you have any other questions, feel free to ask ✌
Thanks for playing! The old lady was creepy, I do agree with that lol. I do appreciate the feedback a lot. Wish all the best to you and your channel. Cheers!
Thanks for playing! I'm glad you found the game scary. Best to you and your channel man! Cheers ✌
This game is INCREDIBLE I hope to be able to bring this WONDERFUL GAME to the Hispanic community. THANK YOU VERY MUCH NIVEN!
Thanks for playing. I deeply appreciate the support and positive feedback. Hello to Hispanic community and all the best to them, as well as for you and your channel friend. I'll try to make some good game in the future for sure lol. Cheers 🍻
OMG THE ENDING!!!!! so good Can't wait for more like this!!!!
Thanks for playing. Hope the deliver same quality content next time for sure. Best to you and your channel!
good game!
Thanks for playing and leaving a positive comment. Best to you mate 🎇
Thanks for playing. I very much appreciate the feedback. The story could have had another ending, for sure, but that feeling of guilt was part of Kate's personality. In real life, we MUST deal with those things differently, of course. All the best to you friend ✌
Great game, enjoyed it!
Thanks for playing. Glad that you enjoyed it. I appreciate the support. Best to you and your channel 🎇
<3 <3 <3 scared the shit outa me
Thanks for playing. I'm glad the game was great for you. Best to you!
Thanks a bunch for playing. It was truly bizarre, I agree. I'm glad you enjoyed the game overall. Best to you and your channel!
the ending was a blast
Thanks a lot for playing. Yeah, the ending was a bit dark. I very much appreciate the support. Wish all the best to you! Cheers!
Thanks for playing! I deeply appreciate the feedback as well as your support by making a great video for my game. Best to you and your channel 🎇
Thanks for playing. I'm glad the game was a win, means a lot man! Cheers ✌
Thanks for playing and I do appreciate the positive feedback. All the best to you and your channel 🎇
This. Was. Awesome. Loved the spookiness and the scares, and the story was really deep and heavy! Great job as always Niven!
Thanks for playing man! Always great to see your playthrough. Deeply appreciate the support and your awesome feedback. Best to you 🍻
You're welcome! And as always, thanks for the awesome games! I can't wait to play the next one!
Niven, how are you doing mate? Sorry to be late, but I guess better late than never lol
Awesome game, I had a lot of fun with it. You keep producing quality games, and I'm really waiting for even bigger projects.
Keep grinding!
Monumental thanks for playing my game man! You, you are one of a kind! Thanks for the BEST feedback and calling me beautiful (even thou I am not). All the best 🍻❤🍷
Wow, that was super dark. Especially the ending caught me off-guard. Great job!
OMG! Thank you so much! Your feedback means a lot. I loved your game and it was just phenomenal. Can't wait for your next project. Much appreciate the support! Cheers 🎉
really nice little game!
Thanks for playing. I liked the commentary, it was sharp and fast. Glad that you enjoyed the story. Best to you!
Good job really nice sort horror experience I really enjoyed it, also made a video on it if you're interested:
Thanks for playing! I deeply appreciate the feedback and honest review of my game. Wish all the best to you and your channel!
Thanks for playing. I deeply appreciate the positive comments and I'm glad the game was successful in a way that it made you think about the story and how tragic things turned up. I did use the "cliché" PT spooks, but it all connected to the story and in my mind it was a representation of Kate's sanity and her guilt. Well, again, all the best to you and your channel 🎇
I didn't think of it as the time, but the slight shifts in the repeated hallway... the iterations do work really well as a representation the recursion one goes through retracing rethinking things. It fits really well.
I enjoyed the story and game they both caught me off guard
Thanks for playing my game. All the best to you mate!
Was a cool horror game, with a sad story. Enjoyed the experience won't post more for spoiler purposes, keep up the great work and left a follow!
Thanks for playing. I deeply appreciate the feedback, the video and thanks for the support as well. All the best to you and your channel. Cheers 🍻
I felt like I was watching a horror drama. In particular, the psychological portrayal of the main character was brought out quite well, making the game immersive! it was fun :)
+ I edited the video to make it a bit scarier than the original game.
Thanks for playing! I'm glad you found the story to be interesting and I was trying to make a game a bit more dramatic, movie like, so I guess it worked for you. Best to you and your channel friend!
this was good
Thanks for playing. I'm glad you liked this game. All the best to you and your channel. Cheers!
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Hey Niven! Loved the story and the ending, but I'm still wondering if Kate actually killed herself. Since she did say "...when I wake up, the nightmare does not end." and that might imply that she's in a loop.
Would love to know more about the story! ( ^ ^)
Thanks a lot for playing my friend, I always appreciate your videos and feedback. I have you say, you are the only one, who asked that question and to be honest, I don't actually know, more like I can't tell. The story is strictly linear and tells the tragic story of both sisters. Now, you hear the gunshot, and the game ends, but was it an actual event that happened or was it a dream in her mind? - Not a bad theory, but again, I can't tell, because in a way it is up to you to interpret the ending, like a "glass half full, half empty" situation.
Best of luck and thanks for the topic. Cheers!
I guess reducing stories to a single true sequence is not all that interesting. I'm actually glad you didn't strictly specify what happened since ambiguity leads to an extended amount of interesting interpretations of the story. Thanks for the reply and have a nice day/evening (^^)
Hello, I will be playing this live tomorrow 11/23 around 2-3 PM EST =D.
Thank you so much Twalls! I will definitely check out the stream! Appreciate the support! Best to you 💌
I just finished watching the playthrough on your stream and I have to say man, your voice is shockingly good, I would assume you do voice overs for movies or animations, because you should definitely get hired for some serious role. Besides that, I liked how you presented my work to your audience and yeah, sorry about the story being too dark. Nevertheless, huge thanks once again and Happy Thanksgiving!
Thank you i appreciate it, I have been recently looking for voice over type work so that could be a possibility. But I did enjoy the game, i love playing these indies there's a lot of hidden talent that needs to be presented keep up the good work. If you have any other games to play on twitch or even in a YouTube video let me know =D
Loved the game!!
Thanks for playing! I appreciate the feedback and nice comments. All the best to your YT channel mate!
creepy game but I feel like I'm missing something.
Thanks for playing. I deeply appreciate the feedback and support. Hope my comment on your channel explained some things. Best to you and your channel!
It helped explain a lot thank you for that, I can't wait to see what else you might do.
I thought the story was incredible. Great game, very engaging.
I would like to ask, if possible, include subtitles in Brazilian Portuguese. There are many Brazilian fans who like to play and watch! <3
Thanks for playing. I really appreciate the feedback, it means a lot to me. Someone else actually asked me the same about the Portuguese. Unfortunately, for now, my projects aren't big enough to have multiple languages included, but that's an idea for the future. I would need to employ someone to do that for me, because I can't speak Portuguese so there is an interpreter needed. Thanks for the suggestion.
Best to you and your channel!